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A little bit of a fic post 
18th-Jan-2007 01:58 am
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Untitled.
Rated R
The thing is you have to remember is that these characters are not mine.
C/A
I needed to unblock the writers block. Free writing is always a good exercise. Don't look for a plot or some sort of deeper meaning. There isn't one. I'm also playing fast and loose with tense, past and present. And even future, I think.

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It was after a fight.

It always was going to be after a fight.

It was going to be when adrenaline sang through her blood, when she walked the knife edge of life and death.

Back to the office, dim lights and too much furniture in the way.

Stumbling, through the dark, kissing like devouring, hands all over.

Angel holds Cordelia against his body, tangles his hands through her knotted hair and brings her forth, takes from her mouth like he’s drinking from a chalice.

Lips stained with paint, he licks it all off and she leans in for more, intoxicated and seduced.

Angel knows all the ways to make a woman sing, can make them beg on their knees and sell their children for the chance that he might give them an hour in his carriage, a night in his bed.

He uses all of that now, wants Cordelia mad with desire for him, wants her hotter than the desert sand, open like a lush flower heavy with spring rain.

Keeping his mouth against hers, his tongue sweeping in for another taste, he pushes her against the couch and drops her down, following like the moon after the sun.


Comments 
18th-Jan-2007 11:47 am (UTC)
Oh....my *licks it all over*

You do have a raw & seductive way with words... must be one of teh reasons I love ya :P

Thanks for sharing this delicious snippet, M,

and:

Going to make her burn for him the way he already burns for her. I ADORE these kind of Angel lines. You know why ;)

S xx
20th-Jan-2007 09:30 pm (UTC)
Hee. I love give you want you want. *G*.

Thank you!
18th-Jan-2007 01:40 pm (UTC)
*DIES*

*is ded*

Keeping his mouth against hers, his tongue sweeping in for another taste, he pushes her against the couch and drops her down, following like the moon after the sun.

you slay me. Brava....
20th-Jan-2007 09:32 pm (UTC)
Thank you!

You always have a knack of zeroing in on the one line that gave me fits, so it rocks my shorts that you liked it.

::bwah::
18th-Jan-2007 02:56 pm (UTC)
If you write like this with writer's block... I need to sit...

And you know this isn't supposed to sound dirty but I'm burning for more of this. :D
20th-Jan-2007 09:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you, hun!

it was a little dirty. *g*
18th-Jan-2007 03:58 pm (UTC)
Keeping his mouth against hers, his tongue sweeping in for another taste, he pushes her against the couch and drops her down, following like the moon after the sun.

Going to make her burn for him the way he already burns for her.


STUNNING.

How you take something so hot, raw and desperately sexual and turn into this beautiful sensuality is truly beyond me. It's like watching a master painter at work or something, the composition slowly works it way out, the colour floods in and BAM! I'm hooked.

I might hate you if I didn't love you so much. ;o) Now write a sequel! This was surprisingly darkness free and I LOVED it.
20th-Jan-2007 09:39 pm (UTC)
Mmm. Thank you, babe.

You know, there is more but not like this. I was toying with doing a Five Times Angel Was Going to Make Love to Cordy (damn, that title is ridiculously long), one for each season, and I wrote them but the others...they sucked.

Hard.

Like golf balls through a garden hose.

But I love that you love this and damn do I love your feedback.
20th-Jan-2007 10:20 pm (UTC)
I BET you do...

That was meant to sound dirty fyi. Also? Your C/A *WUBS* icon? Best thing EVER.

Did you see my latest post? I have had no replies and I'm feeling unloved. :o(
20th-Jan-2007 10:27 pm (UTC)
Feel free to grab!

Uh. The icon.

Not...

never mind.

::runs to Gab's LJ::
20th-Jan-2007 10:28 pm (UTC)
LMAO!

I'm watching Voodoo Moon for the first time. Have a feeling I wont be getting much sleep tonight...
18th-Jan-2007 06:43 pm (UTC)
Oh man, I am having horrific writer's block and I am churning out...well, it ain't buttah. LOL

You have writer's block and you come up with something amazing like this. Your use of language never ceases to amaze me.

Wow, fantastic job, really. Wow.
20th-Jan-2007 09:42 pm (UTC)
With feedback like this, you are fast becoming my favorite person.



Writers block sucks. I've had it for days so all I do is write for six hours and then delete it all.

It's a circle of hell Dante never got around to describing.
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6th-Jun-2007 10:55 pm (UTC)
Thank you again. I liked this one. It helped me over a dry spell. Most times when I think too hard about a fic, it doesn't come out as well, the ones that I just let 'go' of are the ones that come out the best.

I like the contrast between C/A - I know it's more apparent between B/A if you're looking at their bodies but Buffy, to me, is as much a part of darkness as Angel. Personality-wise, symbolically, Cordelia and Angel contrast well. She's Persephone, May Queen. He's Hades, he belongs to the underworld, to the cool shadows. They bring those things to each other worlds, and it makes sense. At least to me.

Sorry for rambling.

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